# Crossing on the Bay

**URL:** <https://community.thevirtualinstructor.com/t/crossing-on-the-bay/1754>\
**Category:** Share Your Art\
**Created:** [July 21, 2021, 5:59am UTC](https://community.thevirtualinstructor.com/t/crossing-on-the-bay/1754 "2021-07-21T05:59:47Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 4\
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**Author:** ![Dhyatt215](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex030/user_avatar/community.thevirtualinstructor.com/dhyatt215/32/875_2.png) [@Dhyatt215](https://community.thevirtualinstructor.com/u/Dhyatt215)\
**Post date:** [July 21, 2021, 5:59am UTC](https://community.thevirtualinstructor.com/t/crossing-on-the-bay/1754/1 "2021-07-21T05:59:47Z")

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Another sailboat or two, from San Francisco Bay.

 ![image](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex030/uploads/thevirtualinstructor/original/2X/8/8826862841f404f5bccda8e9802753d62c66221e.jpeg)

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**Author:** ![lilnora](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex030/user_avatar/community.thevirtualinstructor.com/lilnora/32/1050_2.png) [@lilnora](https://community.thevirtualinstructor.com/u/lilnora)\
**Post date:** [July 21, 2021, 11:22am UTC](https://community.thevirtualinstructor.com/t/crossing-on-the-bay/1754/2 "2021-07-21T11:22:04Z")

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I love it, maybe a little darker on the sail of the closest sailboat, especially where the sails of each boat cross. But you should be very proud to get it looking like there is a very windy day. I love the subjects.

Lenora

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**Author:** ![Dhyatt215](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex030/user_avatar/community.thevirtualinstructor.com/dhyatt215/32/875_2.png) [@Dhyatt215](https://community.thevirtualinstructor.com/u/Dhyatt215)\
**Post date:** [July 21, 2021, 7:03pm UTC](https://community.thevirtualinstructor.com/t/crossing-on-the-bay/1754/3 "2021-07-21T19:03:55Z")

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Thank you so much for the suggestions. I know I didn’t feel quite like I was finished with this drawing but I wasn’t sure how to proceed. I was thinking I need to make some of the dark water darker to contrast the lighter shade of the boat… your suggestion helps a lot and I might work on a little bit more.

I’m just happy you took a look thank you so much.

Darrel Hyatt

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**Author:** ![lilnora](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex030/user_avatar/community.thevirtualinstructor.com/lilnora/32/1050_2.png) [@lilnora](https://community.thevirtualinstructor.com/u/lilnora)\
**Post date:** [July 28, 2021, 12:57pm UTC](https://community.thevirtualinstructor.com/t/crossing-on-the-bay/1754/4 "2021-07-28T12:57:50Z")

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Getting there. Keep going! Lenora