Crossing on the Bay

Another sailboat or two, from San Francisco Bay.

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I love it, maybe a little darker on the sail of the closest sailboat, especially where the sails of each boat cross. But you should be very proud to get it looking like there is a very windy day. I love the subjects.

Lenora

Thank you so much for the suggestions. I know I didn’t feel quite like I was finished with this drawing but I wasn’t sure how to proceed. I was thinking I need to make some of the dark water darker to contrast the lighter shade of the boat… your suggestion helps a lot and I might work on a little bit more.

I’m just happy you took a look thank you so much.

Darrel Hyatt

Getting there. Keep going! Lenora